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Monday, April 16, 2012

B.F.C.F. Chapter 1


       Sometime in the universe I not sure when, I woke up in my old school. I can’t remember anything at all. Oh, did I forget to introduce myself sorry my name is JC Smith , I am a brunette girl who is a part Cherokee Native American that is in 5th gr. wearing a teal and white striped t-shirt and some new jeans. Me and my friends wake up in our old school and can’t remember anything sorry again I keep on repeating. Well, my friends are Peyton Kinsley who is an older twin who is full American blonde girl that is in 4th gr. wearing a t-shirt that is orange with a lighter orange polka-dot pattern, and a grey skirt. The younger twin of Peyton is Carmen she is also; a full American blonde 4th grader wearing an old football jersey that roots for the New York Giants with black utility pants. Then there is Riley Howard who is a full American brunette like me (except for the full American thing) and she is a 4th grader wearing a black hat with buckles and a green t-shirt that says Judgment House  (which is a drama we do at our school) and a pair tan pants. Then Faith Logan who is a blonde 3rd grader who is part Irish wears an everything I love crossword t-shirt and denim looking leggings.      
    This is my group and we will find out what happened. Well First we have to make a plan. “Well, how ‘bout we walk around like we are meant to be here, then we start talking and seeing if we can figure out why we are here,” said Peyton “ We could go up to the control room on top at least that may be where they watch everyone.” Faith said pointing to the camera’s around the room. ”Good idea Faith, how about we walk all the way up” looking at the stairs let’s see how high it can go.

     So Carmen grabbed a GPS (. The kind that tracks people and who they are also, the building your in) she found and looked at how many floors there were in the building she said “I am sure we don’t want to walk all the way to the control room. It’s 217 floors away.” “Well I guess we need another plan wait what floor are we on any way?” I asked. Riley was the one holding it now so she replied “On floor 983. Quick some people are coming and hold on I am seeing who they are and- done. O.K well ones a woman who is a brunette like me and JC and has blonde highlights and the other is a man who has red hair, is young and is wearing a blue suit. Both of them are just normal people so I guess we don’t need to worry, sorry ‘bout that guys.

   “Well, I guess we don’t need to run but, we do need to think on how to get up.” I said “What if we build some sort of machine with these old rust parts.” I said holding up some kind of parts from a car. “Or we could just ride the elevator right behind you guys but, the cool way. First I can see some people from the lair upstairs that are going down and in another elevator next to going up. So if we open the elevator and jump and then jump again when they go up then we can just hitch a ride and no one will ever notice.” Carmen said looking at the GPS device. “Great idea Carmen, except how do we open the elevator?” We all thought for a moment. All of us were thinking when Peyton grabbed a steal pipe that was bent and was try to open it. “Um, guys the people are coming up and we have a minute in a half to get it open and jump" said Peyton. Everyone was pulling with Peyton as hard as they could and in 30 seconds to spare we opened it together.

    Carmen said to us “guys we have 20 seconds we better hurry and jump.” O.K all of us were ready except when security was surrounding us.All of a sudden someone I've never seen before comes from no where and starts doing chops, kicks, punches, slaps, of all kinds on the guards . In seconds the guards are on the floor. The hero of the day runs away . "five seconds" I said “Three, two, one jump.” I said. We jumped on to the elevator. But, wait we were still falling.


ps: Hey please tips on the title or story for me thank you. And, this is a sneak peak of the book I am writing.












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